She said I was (c)rude,
ah! what a prude…
or really did I falter,
or was it just my alter.
nevertheless the writing was clear..
she dumped me, whom I held dear.
was it painful.. oh! yes sir it was..
thousand swords in my heart crossed
all crying out for peace,
love eternal and a little bliss.
but no for a broken heart its all amiss
yearn in every bit, every torn piece.
time heals everything,
and so it did
life was once again lively, full of bling.
I had nearly forgotten her,
her memories hid
until the day she came up to me
told me how much fun it was,
yet strangely I had moved on!
for once rejected, I had been dejected
but with her memories ejected,
life was once again rolling on.
so morale of the story, if any there is
life never stops, you have to move on
for what was yours, will come back
and what din’t was just a mirage,
essence is to dream on and on and on ….
waiting for the day when can we write without calling upon ‘but’ those many times
thnx yaar for pointing out the abundance of “but”-s out there .. corrected .. all suggestions welcome
coooool be …………nice one .. lekin tujhe huaa kya ..kab se
dil pe haath rakho.. aur bolo AAL IZZ WELL!!
:P
nice effort though..